Dear Santa,
Christmas is the season when you spend time with your family and...YOU GET GIFTS! Also, you get to be in the presence of Santa Claus. I’ve been okay this year. One thing I really want is a video game that was released in September 2010. The name of it is Halo Reach. I want it because the game is one of the most popular games of the year. I think I deserve it because I’ve been doing my chores a lot around the house.
I try to be a very well behaved son for my parents. They work very hard to provide me with a nice home and I always help around the house, so they don’t have to do all the housework. Having the game will give me the opportunity to relax after I do my chores.
From,
Matthew Accatatta
Nice job Matt. You explained what you wanted and why you deserved it. One thing you could do to make it better is to further describe why you deserved it but otherwise great job.
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